How to improve English writing skills?
English writing is a very important skill for everyone. Because it is very helpful on doing many things such as business, or someone who wants learn English well.
There are many ways to improve English writing skills. For example, writing diary everyday, watching CNN, reading English newspaper. Writing diary can not only make some friends but also enhance English ability step by step. Choosing one way to improve English writing is essential to an English learner.
According to those examples, there are many ways to improve English writing skills, and everyone can find a suitable way for themselves.
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I can tell you guys make quite a lot of effort in this piece of work. I can tell you have given general information, thesis statement, supporting sentences, and a concluding sentence. Well done, boys. I also appreciate the way you put down your thoughts.
回覆刪除Apart from the above, I would like to give you some suggestions regarding your mistakes in this piece of journal. Hopefully, they will be helpful.
1. It’s better if you can combine the first two sentences together.
2. “wants to learn” instead of want to learn
3. “keep a diary” instead of “write a diary”
4. Did you notice that this is not a complete sentence --“For example, writing diary every day, watching CNN, reading English newspaper”. It is better if you can revise “There are many ways…English newspaper” as “There are many ways to improve English writing skills, such as writing diary every day, watching CNN, reading English newspaper.”