Well, there are many good benefits between backpacking and tour travel trip. And of course there are still many different between them. Focus on the expense budgets, backpacking is cheaper than tour travel trip, because backpacker do not need high class hotel or restaurant. They just need a place to sleep and have a meal. But tour travel trip is totally different. It is focus on nice hotel, delicious food and comfortable trip. Though theses two way to go abroad have the same goal that is to visit famous spots, but there are some different. For example, to be a backpacker you could go anywhere you want and you do not have to care about the time when you visit a place.
To be a backpacker you have to do anything by yourself, but you can learn a lot of things. Not only the basic backpacker have to do but how you to deal the problem.
To contrast with backpacking, tour travel trip is very easy and comfortable you do not have to care about anything. The only thing you have to care is your baggage. But join tour travel trip is not free enough, because you have to fellow the route and time.
I decided that in the future if I could go abroad I will take the backpacking way. I want see many different things and meet a lot of people and go many place by myself.
You put down your thoughts nicely and clear. Well done.
回覆刪除Nonetheless, I noticed some mistakes which should be avoided, such as 'Focus on' in line 2, ',' before because in line 2, and countable noun phrase'high class hotel or restaurant'in line 2.
Additionally, there are some grammar mistakes in the followings as well:
'It is focus' in line 3,
'Not only the ...but how...' in line 7,
'join tour travel trip' in line 3 from the bottom,
'fellow' in line 3 from the bottom as well,
'I want see' in the second line from the bottom.
Fix them. :)