The camera never lies. After looking those pictures I think many things can be change and fake. Once you have technique of how to modify picture, you can do many things.
Nowadays many people are become like to use some system to modify their picture.
I think make up is the same way, cover something or add something. You can change someone who is not very beautiful into a popular one.
To me, I do not very like this because I do not want to be cheat and if someone find that he or she was be cheat they will broken heart.
What is truth in this world. There are too many fakes surround us and we could hardly recognize whether is true or not. I think maybe many model in magazine are not the real one, because they all modify by the computer system. That is so terrible. What a competitive world .
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回覆刪除Hi Robert Chen,
回覆刪除I'm sorry to see so many evil, nasty people posting some nasty ads on your board. Just delete them.
Anyway, regarding your good work, here are some feedback and comments from me.
1. The camera never lies. After looking those pictures I think many things could be change and fake.
請修改change的形式
could用can就好
2. Once you have technique of how to modify picture, you can do many things.
of how to...的文法不對，應該用形容詞子句來寫，try it yourself; yet, if you really don't know how to do it, ask me.
3. Nowadays many people are become like to use some system to modify their picture.
請改are become like to use，也太多動詞了吧
另外，system改software較順
4. I think make up is the same way, cover something or add something.
你的cover something or add沒有動詞
5. You can change someone who is not very beautiful into a popular one. 文法用得好
6. To me, I do not very like this because I do not want to be cheat and if someone find that he or she was be cheat they will broken heart.
第一、請不要說very like，我想哭
第二、be cheat的cheat動詞型態不對
第三、把and改成besides，然後將這一大長句改成兩句。
第四、they的前面請加逗號
第五，will broken heart的動詞形式有問題
7. What is truth in this world.
問號
8. There are too many fakes surround us and we could hardly recognize whether is true or not.
第一、surround的形式不對，因為你有there are
第二、whether is true or not沒有主詞在其中
9. I think maybe many model in magazine are not the real one, because they all modify by the computer system.
第一、model要用複數
第二、modify改beV+pp
第三、一樣，system改software
10. That is so terrible. What a competitive world .
用competitive world來做ending很怪，為什麼competitive呢?